I think that everybody tries to be to picky with the people the want to fall in love with, or atleast have a relationship. The reality is no bodies perfect in anyway and thats the truth, take a chance with love no matter how risky it may be. Excellent write 5/5

Alright job, the rhyme scheme was okay, a little basic for my liking and the flow could have been better. If you want your poetry to be taken more seriously, I'd suggest not using words like wanna. Keep writing.

Love can be painful that's true but one day, there will be some one for you. That goes to everyone who were cheated by their Xs. 5/5

This applies to me rite now, im going through every word that u have written here. it is a great poem, and it gives me a new perspective on the girl that is trying so hard for me. thank you!

Someone to be there for you and to hold you tight,
Someone to make you feel like everything is alright...

Superb lines flowing so well and well put together. The whole poem is good.

Tc
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This had a very great meaning but your flow was a little off. I suggest to stick with one thing, if you're going to have a rhyming stanza, you should make everything rhyming. It just distracts the reader from the whole meaning. But this poem had great emotion, so it sort of covered the flow. All in all, this was a pretty good poem.

THIS WAS AMAZING I LOVE THIS ONE SOO MUCH I CANT BELIEVE HOW MUCH I CAN RELATE IT WAS JUST THE WAY YOU PUT YOUR WORDS THAT MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM I FEEL LIKE I CAN READ THIS OVER AND OVER AND NEVER GET SICK OF IT. 5 out of 5

Wow. i can so relate to this poem, this poem is amazing. keep up the wonderful work! =]