Another beautiful poem you have here hunni, i reallyl ik you yourel ike mel ol. Your style is what i was when i first wrote poetry lol :d keep up the good work and remember to aways keep smiling :d

xxx alex xxx

Great Job. another great poem! You have talent. This Flowed and Rhymed pretty good. Keep up the great work! 5/5

Hey,
This part of the story is just as great as the first part, its easy to read and I enjoyed it, and as I said before I hope its only fiction..
You definitely deserve a 5/5
kisses Stephanie