by Vanessa May 15, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
"Ashes, ashes, we all fall down!" |
by Twisted16
Now that was effin chilling, relly sort of haunting, I loved it the whole point that the little girl was a ghost wow |
Excellent poem. you really put effort into your work. It tells such a neat story and the ending has such a twist. Your a very excellent poet. ive added this to my favs. 5/5 |
by Taylor Lyn
That was such a beautifully gorgeous poem, even though the topic was so sad! You created such vividness with your words, great flow and structure. You took a decent amount of time writing this and it is absolutely stunning! 5/5 from me! |
Very nice, it was ......gorgeous, lol, to many people use beautiful, all together a very nice poem |
by Marc Ortiz
And again another beautiful poem from you! I'm guessing you like the theme 'child' in writing poems! XD anyway great poem! I enjoyed it! well done keep writing :) |