So sad, so well written. I loved the message behind the poem. it is true that most people think of women, and girls when they think of abused and those with ed's. The poem you wrote, was excellent, and descriptive, I feel for the little boy I do. Tahnks for all the comments, by the way I like this user name alot better. It has a ring to it. 5/5 for your words are always a treasure to read.

Sad.
really sad.
but i do like this poem.
its really nice to see people writing about things that actually matter.
keep it up =)

Well this is a very good poem, im a fan of acrostics and this one is great, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!