I almost cried reading this. you see to know what im going through. keep writing your really good at it :]

I almost cried reading this...I like it alot...Keep writing...you are a very good writer.... :)

Thank you Amanda..For commenting one of my poems.
This is a really deep poem the part that touched me the most is:

Dad, It's me,
Your little girl.
You brought me here,
into this world.

That part to me creates poem in the poem and it just makes.. I dont know what to say. All I can say is that Keep it up!! and I hope to see moreeee woop woop!!
xx Rox

A really sad and touching poem. One hting id change though just to make it more emotional is change dad to daddy. This will make it seem even more meotional and will really toucvh the reader. Anyways i hope this is a topic you havnt experianced. Yet this is a topic many can relate to if they do not have a strong relationship with their father. Your title and everything just really tells a story. And a sad sad story at that. To improve this you should of used more varied punctuation. Other then that a good read. xx

An emotional write, that is sure to reach the heart of many. Keep posting.

Very nice write!!

That was really good i think u should look at my poems though none are as good as yours i dont get very many comments so please look if your in the mood

I found this to be a very emotional write young lady, even for this dad of a teenage daughter. Please take a moment to read a few of mine. You may find the shoe is on the other foot in my case. May your heart once again be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.

sadaddy

This is amazing. i loved it. 5/5 you should check out my poems. i had alot others but i dleetd them becuz i wanted to start fresh. but i just recently lost my dad. and i no how it feels to seem like he isnt there.. great job