Aww thats really sad =[ i know how you feel

That was sad. You're carved into my heart and mind for the rest of time. I like that line. Stands out to me. Really good job XD

Aww so sad. Full of emotions and lots of sadness in it. I can relate to it. hope you'll feel better soon. Amazing poem. Keep up the good work! 5/5

In every road in life you need to decide what you want to do. Writing is no different. All your work is addressed to a certain person so your audience is really limited to that one person. That is good if you want to do such a thing., but to write for the masses you must see your work through their eyes and write for them showing them every emotion, every thought takes practice and hard work but its worth it. Think about it Plot121