by Vanessa May 15, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Holding a blade just under her chin |
by Twisted16
Wonderful vivid imagerey. keep up the excellent work, I am loving it. |
Well done work!!..kp writing the poem is powerful and the story line is strong...good choice of words...i give a 5/5 |
Wow. Pretty intense. Definitely tells a story-- nice word choice and story line. It really impacts the reader. Nice work! |
by Fan Angeleo
This is what writing is for. helping us release the poet inside, well done. |