Pain</3

by Mandy   May 15, 2007


I'm thinking of all
The pain that you've made
Scars and aches
That may never fade.

I've given up so much for you
But yet you didn't know
I've kept so many feelings in
But now it's time to let them go.

You've lied to me a million times
All the stories I thought were true
Just to get the attention
Oh the things that you would do.

You didn't care about my pain
You didn't care about my hurt
The only thing that you accomplished
Was making me feel like dirt.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rose Noble

    Sorry, double post. ><

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose Noble

    Wooow, I liked this one. I agree with Sydney. =3

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose Noble

    Wooow, I liked this one. I agree with Sydney. =3

  • 17 years ago

    by Sydney

    Oo I like this one. The emotion in it was great. Your rhyming was good as well. I tend to have problems with that but it seems to come natural to you but I could be decieved : ] The flow was good and overall it was a good poem. Good work on this one :D