Rain (Haiku)
by BeautifulxMess May 15, 2007
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Rain; It falls forever |
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17 years ago
by Startle Me
This was good
Although...
The word "Bleak" kind of ruined it for me
It was as though it wasn't part of the poem.
It felt secluded.
I thought it ruined the flow of your poetry.
Other than that.
Beautiful work, dearest :]
