by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex May 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Read to the end. THEN you'll get why it's in the love section. XD |
by Espoirfailed
Everyone said they laughed reading this, i didn't. i loved the poem, i read it because it was in the same contest as one of mine, and i thought SH*T this is good lol, but no really it is amazing. i am in awe of this poem. i didn't find it funny at all i thought the first bit was full of anger and i loved the whole meaning and the unexpectedness of this poem it was so sweet and i loved the line, |
Wow at first I thought it was a poem based on anger but at the end it was completly different because I thought that this Marry person was like a big jerk so the whole "Will you marry me thing threw me off" Now I see why its under the love category. I liked it, because it showes that sometimes love existes in the most random of places. The only thing I would change is getting rid of some of the "Ohh my my my" (S) they can be a bit repetative. |
by isabel
Wow... |
by Robert
This love hate thing is just kicking my butt. I hope you could stick with one subject and stay on its course it would lkead for a much better write as a whole Plot121 |
by Jenni Marie
Oh god I cracked up at certain places in this, particularly with the line |