Wow this is great

The words are simple but the emotion is powerful both has a scence of innocence and grown up feel to it good job Plot121

Wow!!Amazing..this 1 is soo perfect...emotion is portrayed in a strong yet different manner...n usage of simple yet strong words have added to the depth..Good wrk!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Very nice poem. I am going through something just like that. Another 5/5.

This is a great poem because everybody can relate to it. we've all had those moments where we tried to say something but the words never came out. Excellent job 5/5

Again? yeah always...stuck rite... he he lol.. u captivated ur feelings well with a nice flow. gr8 5/5 keep up the gudwork

With love
Fsams

This is very very very nice. I loved the way it sounded. The rythm you kept was amazing. I can picture someone speaking this aloud to me. Your ending I liked alot. You stated "I feel so out of control,
vulnerable and weak,
my mouth is moving up and down,
but I am unable to speak." which I thought was a really brillant combination of words very affective because often a time I feel exactly that speaking to beautiful girls, get kinda nervous and stutter a bit lol. Good job BreeAnna! I will check in again as always -chris