This was a good write the flow was clear and good no grammar errors I could see and the message was well done good Job Plot121

Aww...this 1 was beautiful...the flow was flawless...n beautiful choice of words...u put the message across in a simple yet lovely manner..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

The first stanza was really off, the flow was
Umm... how do I say? Rocky? No, just off.
Second stanza, darling, amazing :]
It was really simple to me.
Sometimes it could be good.
Sometimes that could be bad.
For this poem, it was kind of both.
I loved that it was simple.
But there was no mystery into it.
Other than that.
It's sweet.
4/5?

Good job, i love it! good to see you found a decent man :) keep up the good work

No, I have found no man yet. but thanks!

I liked it. I enjoyed reading it. It is a nice write. Keep up the nice work:) 5/5

It was a very nice message, sentimental and inspiring images. However, some of the flow was a bit difficult to manuever around...pretty good though!