Immaculate Beauty

by Fsams   May 16, 2007


It was God's will I met you
Now it's my will to meet you
Not in the chat room again
But in real, clear to the naked eyes

You seem to know my feelings
And you do read my heart
Sometimes I feel you're too close
And you never remain apart

I can really feel you here
Your cute lips, cheeks, long hair
Your brown eyes and fair visage
An immaculate beauty at a young age

I feel empty without my phone
And I log in to see you on-line
Even if I chat you for a while
Believe me dear I feel so fine

O I long to see you Jiya
Your eyes, cheeks o dear
To see the God's flawless creation
So immaculate, perfect and rare

Written by Fsams
15/05/2007
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  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    So cute and this one is special coz u have written it for JIya....how special and romantic.....

    Wow 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like first stanza. Second stanza is great. Third is good. Imagery is excellent. I don't like fourth stanza. I like fifth stanza very much. I don't like the topic, you described emotions on a good way. Sorry but I really don't like first and fourth stanza, 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Wow this is very special for me coz my name is there in this piece. Love you honey mwah. Keep writing.

    Jiya

  • 17 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Well written. This was thoughtful and heartfelt from the begining to end. The wording was great and really described the feelings towards her. Keep writting!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was amazing, well penned powerful emtion excellent word choice, amazing flow, job well done once again 5/5 for you really deserve it

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