HoW sweeT iS thiS poeM anD i loveD iT. verY mucH fascinatinG. keeP yR writinG tO shimmeR likE aS thiS onE.... 5/5.

'raiN'

luzaN

Another great poem, although i think you paid too much attention to the rhyming couples. Instead of making the rest of the line go with the rhyming couplet, try doing it the other way around. Great poem though, keep it up.

Soothing, peaceful! This is definitely the making of a great poem! 5/5

Nice poem...it kinda paints a picture in my mind..which i always enjoy those kinds of poems... =]

the flow was great and the rhyming was perfect.. great work on this one. 5/5

Seems u really impressed ur readers.. and included me ofcourse..lines absolutely perfect word by word..amazing u've done a very great job! it has a great meaning and very well written, the structure was great so u deserve to get 5/5

It was awesome from start to ending. your words are ordinary but it suits the poem well, you have describe your topic well and the rhyming is good..keep it up 5/5 for it!!

I love poems about rain or storms. You've captured some great images here. Interesting rhyme scheme and a nice flow to it. Great poem.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

This is really good i love the rhyming words that you used! 5/5

Great use of description through ot the pice I very much liked how you walked the reader through it all well done Plot121

Again great vidual aid
perfect poem
5

This was good I loved how you played out everything through the rain storm your piece got choppy here and their but your work on a whole was good Plot121

Beautiful poem....the imagery you painted was so vivid and descriptive. Flowed beautifully as well, and overall was an amazing poem. I'll give this one a 5! :)
Keep up the great work!!!!

You have a unique gift. I really enojoyed this poem.

Ally.x

I love the imagery you created in this, I found it to be very vivid and pretty.

The message behind these words is wonderfully portrayed, and the flow is okay throughout.

The only thing I didn't like was the constant use of the word ''the.''

Other than that, beautiful.

Wow this is really good, i love your poems there so well writen and they all seem to have so much emotion in them. 5/5

I could just imagine it as I read. It's so vivid and alive. I could just feel it.
Beautiful. Great work. Keep it up =)