Sweet Nothings To My Heart

by Michelle   Apr 17, 2004


"Your poetic sweet nothings to my heart,
Mean everything while we're apart...."

I thought you were right my darling,
That words simply cannot convey
Strength of sentiment or depth of love
But then I read your most recent poem today.

The emotions you evoke in me
Send my poor besotted heart reeling
How do you do it time and again?
Put pen to paper with such tender feeling...

My heart overflows each time
That I look up to the screen to see
That the one I love in life the most
Has contemplated and written about me.

Do you know how much it means?
To read the words you have put together lovingly...
Who would have known just months ago
My heart would be your captive, never again to be free..?

I marvel at the brilliant descriptions
Of the love and life we share together
Your amazing vocabulary stuns me
As I read your words of our forever.

Thank you once again, My Love
For just everything that you are
Once I can hold you in my arms
I'll never let you again from me be very far....

Your poems are spectacular Craig, they light up my world..thank you Sweetheart, and I will love you always...couple more months, and no more of this agony!!!! xxxxAlways yours baby, Mich

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  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    I agree with Michelle, that the comments "my apologies" and "yes" left were somewhat constructive rather than just "I hate it" or "that stinks", but also agree with Tim that they should have left their name...do YOU have poetry on this site? If it's not good enough for you, then why even read and comment? I'd like to hear what you have to say about my stuff...but only if you leave your name! :o) (btw, I STILL love your poem, Michelle!) ~Luv~

  • 20 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Whoa Whoa Whoa!! What the hell is with the person upstairs here who thinks they are the "Poet Laureate" of the site here. Constructive criticism is only good if you have the balls to leave your real name, which obviously this person doesn`t. Anyway, I think the poem is really good, and who knows better than me? Keep up the great work, as you always do. Love, TIM

  • 20 years ago

    by Kristina K

    Hey Michelle. This was a very sweet poem. You write your poems with such feeling that they are clearly evident. Each phrase of your work of art is just simply magnificent. Very well done and kepp up the excellent work. I very much look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future.
    Take care
    Kristina
    xoxo

  • 20 years ago

    by Michelle

    ...and I forgot to say, constructive critisism for a change, which I don't mind at all..instead of the ridiculous insults that have been going around this site..so thank you.

  • 20 years ago

    by Michelle

    no offense taken, you have a right to your opinion and will continue to write whatever drivel comes to mind, but thanks for your comment! :) Michelle

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