Quote My Heart

by Jenni Marie   May 16, 2007


Finally speaking to my mind
No longer broken in two
My heart is working once more
Thanks to a little TLC from you.

Been closed down so long
Slowly turning to ice
Feeling empty and lonely
Figuring this was the price.

The price for loving
For daring to care
Having audacity to think
He would always be there.

Now I know this isn't true
Never before have I felt this way
My heart feeling like it may burst
Growing with love each day.

Now all that is left to do
Is pray that we'll never part
What I want you to remember
That's a direct quote from my heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    "The price for loving
    For daring to care
    Having audacity to think
    He would always be there."
    Beautiful verse, m'dear. It helped the flow smooth out incredibly.

    "Now I know this isn't true
    Never before have I felt this way
    My heart feeling like it may burst
    Growing with love each day."
    HOWEVER, That verse totally demolishes the flow.

    I like the first three verses more... they flowed better. The last two were horrendously off lol.
    Still, awesome poem m'dear. I think with a little more punctuation at the end of your lines and not just the last one of each verse your poem could be golden (or, technically, platinum.)

    Great job m'dear =]
    5/5
    ~Stephen White

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