"The price for loving
For daring to care
Having audacity to think
He would always be there."
Beautiful verse, m'dear. It helped the flow smooth out incredibly.

"Now I know this isn't true
Never before have I felt this way
My heart feeling like it may burst
Growing with love each day."
HOWEVER, That verse totally demolishes the flow.

I like the first three verses more... they flowed better. The last two were horrendously off lol.
Still, awesome poem m'dear. I think with a little more punctuation at the end of your lines and not just the last one of each verse your poem could be golden (or, technically, platinum.)

Great job m'dear =]
5/5
~Stephen White