Wow, very depressing, i can feel the pain of the poem, really nice description and flow. 5/5 hope you read one of mine.

His careless hand has written my fate.
and
"Rise my Beloved,Crucify me"
^^My favourite lines...very powerful and great choice of words too
Bhawna...Great work my frend..kp it up!!.....this peice is depressing though yet well penned!..5/5!!
xxPoojaxx

Wow, well done, excellently written poem. Superb imagery.
I like the ending, so powerful poem, 5/5.

Very good one for real :):):) I loved it very much:)))

keep it up:)))
I will give ya 5/5 :))

khuloodan:))
smile all the time:))