Let the blood spill

The flow was right on for this poem. Yes, maybe it was a little cliche, but there's a beauty to it than I can't exactly pin point. It shows a certain weakness, but somehow it displays a sense of control. Some of the words you chose we simple, but sometimes simplicity brings serenity to a poem. While there was a certain chaotic feel, there was a serenity. Hopefully that made sense =P
It was great.
5/5.

Scream you silent screams

You= "Your"

Other then that one minor error I enjoyed reading this poem. I found the ryhme to be simple yet effective the flow was flawless and them structure neat. The emotions which you portrayed into this piece were strong and powerful. I think you went into great depth when writing this piece. Well done 5/5~mel

Great lexical power and meaning. Nicely flowing with a good word choice. Keep writing. tc

I'm usually not a fan of cutting poems but yours are far different from most others. I love the way your words flow and the imagery is very strong throughout the poem. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

Oh god, tat was such a great poem, but so sad.
you have wrote this greatly, i like the flow and the style, it shows you are really talented. keep it up.
a 5/5 from me as u really deserve it