This is exactly the way i feel when i cut

Love this poem. Very nicely written and I will read sum of your other work.

OMG!! that was so good!! Like...wow...i love it!! 5/5!!

~Elisha

(if you don't mind, read some of mine somethime. judging my yours.. i think you like them. )

Beautiful sad poems you penned here, good rhyme yet flow well within beautiful emotions written, Beautiful expressive.....

"You can never lose anything that belongs to you, nor can you posses what is not really mine. To never run from a problem: either it will chase you or you will run into another just like it, although it may have a different face or name. To have no concern for tomorrow. Today is the yesterday over which you had concern."

Have a good weekend, best wishes.

Oh god, tat was such a great poem, but so sad.
you have wrote this greatly, i like the flow and the style, it shows you are really talented. keep it up.
a 5/5 from me as u really deserve it

I'm usually not a fan of cutting poems but yours are far different from most others. I love the way your words flow and the imagery is very strong throughout the poem. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

Great lexical power and meaning. Nicely flowing with a good word choice. Keep writing. tc

Scream you silent screams

You= "Your"

Other then that one minor error I enjoyed reading this poem. I found the ryhme to be simple yet effective the flow was flawless and them structure neat. The emotions which you portrayed into this piece were strong and powerful. I think you went into great depth when writing this piece. Well done 5/5~mel

The flow was right on for this poem. Yes, maybe it was a little cliche, but there's a beauty to it than I can't exactly pin point. It shows a certain weakness, but somehow it displays a sense of control. Some of the words you chose we simple, but sometimes simplicity brings serenity to a poem. While there was a certain chaotic feel, there was a serenity. Hopefully that made sense =P
It was great.
5/5.