by Marcus May 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Love starts with an infatuation |
by Chris
So, i'm sure you know what i'm about to say. i like the whole ending of the lines... ya know, the "-ion"... "-ing". it's very unique. kept my attention. good job. |
by Delicious 42
Hey this was wonderful!!! I loved it. |
by seymour
Its really good, it came from the heart |
by Laurie Tran
I love how you used nouns at the end of one line and the verb with the same root word in the other. |
by hani
I love it , its very nice and beautiful good work 5/5 |