All around me

by caitlyn   May 16, 2007


This heart of mine is slowly fading away
it's getting further each and every day
it's sunny out side, but it's raining on me
this pain and emptiness no one can see
people all around me, but i walk alone
i am sensitive but I'm made of stone
I'm crying but there are no tears
the sky is clear, around me it's dark
we are together but were falling apart
flowers are blooming, but around me there dead
puddles are brown, all around me there red
climbing a mountain, falling down a hole
you took it away, ripped out my soul
looking at you, are you blind?
hint hint can you see this pain inside
trying to fly away, but attached to a chain
stuck here forever, never free again
the floor is clean, I'm walking on dirt
being protected, I'm getting hurt
my eyes are open but i cannot see
get me out of here; get me out of my misery.

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  • 17 years ago

    by caitlyn

    Thanks i will write more i write a pome like every day about my feelings thanks again.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem,. lots of deep feelings poured into this, and it was a great write, love your style of displaying your pain within, be reading more. Keep up the good work, I can relate to your writing very well, thanks , your friend Tracy ~5/5~