by isabel May 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Poetry can erase the pain |
by nai
This is such a powerful peace, and one of the reasons i love poetry its such a great way to express ones feeling. |
I like the emotion in the poem, but the repition was bad for this peace and some of the rhymes were off for me. |
by Vanessa
Spoken words of my soul. that was well written. I agree. Perfect flow, strong emtion, wonderful word choice. I think this is perhaps the best poem I have read all day long. |
OMG!! that is so sad, but i love it!! Once again 5/5 |