OMG!! that is so sad, but i love it!! Once again 5/5

Spoken words of my soul. that was well written. I agree. Perfect flow, strong emtion, wonderful word choice. I think this is perhaps the best poem I have read all day long.

I like the emotion in the poem, but the repition was bad for this peace and some of the rhymes were off for me.

But, keep up the great emotion!

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

This is such a powerful peace, and one of the reasons i love poetry its such a great way to express ones feeling.
i think this is great...i remember feeling poetry was the only way.
good work 5/5