Comments : Mythical Angels Standing Tall

  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Quite different then most poems I've ever read but new ideas are always refreshing. It was interesting although short. 3rd stanza caught me a bit off guard as I wondered if angels would even think something like that. Very thought provoking. A powerful punch into the minds of man in a small poetic package. well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    I really loved it.... i liked how you used the same first line for each stanza, it was short and sweet, yet powerful. the wording was great and the flow was impecible. great job

  • 17 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    I like it...its awesome....but Mythical angels? are they really mythical? hmm...good poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    The repetition was a bit...I don't know...disappointing. I like the idea but for me repeating the first line for each stanza was a little too much. If each stanza was four lines with the first line repeated it might be better but still the idea was something new and I really liked that. Each to their own as the saying goes.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I really loved the repetition of the first line, it creates an image of constant presence of the angels, through the time. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I thought that overall the poem was nicely written, it had good flow and I also liked how you repeated your title in the poem. I think it could have been a bit longer, but maybe I just wanted more. Excellent write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    I love the unique style of this poem ...
    and the repetitive " Mythical angels standing tall; " gives it a "stand out " from the norm feeling.

    Wonderful read
    Take care
    Luanne

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so mystical and unique in every way that you can see..Wording was simple but meaningful

    Keep up the good work
    Take care,
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Loved it. Written amazingly. Keep up the great job 5/5
    Check mine out

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Damn that was awesome, I am almost speechless, the imagery was great, vivid, and the emtion was powerful, the wording was brillant, the flow was perfect, and the reption blew me away. Perfectly Imperfect, please take a bow my friend for you are a bright shinning star in a pitch black sky. As always your written words have spoken straight to my soul, truly amazing 5/5 although you deserve more

  • 17 years ago

    by thandie

    Very frekish different l luv dis
    i simply loved the way it worked so perfectlyyyy....its perfectly fluent..
    keep it up :)
    great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5