Quite different then most poems I've ever read but new ideas are always refreshing. It was interesting although short. 3rd stanza caught me a bit off guard as I wondered if angels would even think something like that. Very thought provoking. A powerful punch into the minds of man in a small poetic package. well done 5/5 |
by Mousie
I really loved it.... i liked how you used the same first line for each stanza, it was short and sweet, yet powerful. the wording was great and the flow was impecible. great job |
I like it...its awesome....but Mythical angels? are they really mythical? hmm...good poem 5/5 |
The repetition was a bit...I don't know...disappointing. I like the idea but for me repeating the first line for each stanza was a little too much. If each stanza was four lines with the first line repeated it might be better but still the idea was something new and I really liked that. Each to their own as the saying goes. |
I really loved the repetition of the first line, it creates an image of constant presence of the angels, through the time. 5/5 |
I thought that overall the poem was nicely written, it had good flow and I also liked how you repeated your title in the poem. I think it could have been a bit longer, but maybe I just wanted more. Excellent write 5/5 |
by Lu
I love the unique style of this poem ... |
by Tricky Daze
It was so mystical and unique in every way that you can see..Wording was simple but meaningful |
Loved it. Written amazingly. Keep up the great job 5/5 |
by Vanessa
Damn that was awesome, I am almost speechless, the imagery was great, vivid, and the emtion was powerful, the wording was brillant, the flow was perfect, and the reption blew me away. Perfectly Imperfect, please take a bow my friend for you are a bright shinning star in a pitch black sky. As always your written words have spoken straight to my soul, truly amazing 5/5 although you deserve more |
by thandie
Very frekish different l luv dis |