Comments : Lost [Double Huitain]

  • 17 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Bravo! Well done keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    What a great job you did with this form. Imagery and word choices were amazing.

    Content to feel the painful scar
    We harness not a memory
    But take the hurt inside our heart
    And let it live on faithfully

    These lines really got me right in the heart.
    Excellent job Jeannie
    Your friend Cindy