Beautiful beautiful poem!!...the repetition have made the poem look so intense..and the poem is sooo sweet..it's like you r pouring out your thoughts through this 1...good work!

Another great poem! you're really talented! you should be proud! flow was good for me! I really enjoyed reading this one. 5/5!

My favorite stanza.

I would rather the heavens take me
Than for you to forsake me
Blowing my smoke to the clear blue sky
I would pray the Lord let me die