A very good Acrostic poem! well done! flow was good! another excellent work! :) keep writing! good job! 5/5! as always!

The flow and rhythm really is on spot, which I know can be a challenge in an acrostic poem. The content of the poem was certainly not sacrificed in the least to this challenging format and I enjoyed reading it very much

Everyday is such a struggle to stay sane
Laughing out loud she whispers his name
Father, he took it on himself
Excellent poem and very good flow, sad heartfelt poem, loved it, it was very well written and a pleasure to read,keep up the good work, your friend Tracy

Great flow, excellent poem really enjoyed your work