Omg loved it....actually reminded me of myself....great job

Sarah

WOW!!!!!
excellent...
You've penned this one so well...the last stanza really got me..it was sad...i did'nt expect the poem to end tht way....lol....but i was'nt least disappointed...beautiful ending.very profound peice..touchin n beautiful
5/5

xxPoojaxx

The last vers made me think. keep writing