by Tricky Daze May 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Think of an house next to sea and just an old woman living in it.this woman were so popular for all her life.But was she popular with the good things she did?No,the lies that she told and her words like a hurtful arrow...Of course she deserved being alone and left on her last years.People like her heard the things for them like they said for others and had regret for all the things they mentioned.But it was too late that the days of her life ended and the nights began.Nobody heard her sad cries and her begs for help and nobody gave her a hand on her life.Even the priest kicked her out of the church and said these to her: |
by Vanessa
This story was well told, the word choice was brillant, I liked the twist near the end, I would like to read more if you eve write more to it, this is enjoyable to read, and the tilte caguht my attention, iknow this isn;t much in the way of a comment, but at least it is honest. 5/5 |
Excellent story ,well told and love the ending , great write enjoy short stories, thanks for sharing ,your friend Tracy~5/5~ |
Ohh, laura we havent spoken in ages. you look gorg in ya new display pic... anyway... interesting hun. But are you really allowed to post that on here? I dnno *sighs* short and sweet. |
by xo kisses xo
I'm sry to say this...but i don't understand the story..the ending confuses me. haha...please send me a pm and tell me what the ending is about. |