by xo kisses xo May 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Looking at you |
Very nice, it shows what the boy is thinking and how he feels inside. He feels sad and mad because his love isn't with him. Nicely done, |
by Sara
Omg!!! this poem is like exactly like me and shane its cah-razy!!! omg! haha... so much alike, its like you took our lives and made it into a poem, a very good poem i must say haha.... 5/5 from me, and great write! |