Omg!!! this poem is like exactly like me and shane its cah-razy!!! omg! haha... so much alike, its like you took our lives and made it into a poem, a very good poem i must say haha.... 5/5 from me, and great write!

Very nice, it shows what the boy is thinking and how he feels inside. He feels sad and mad because his love isn't with him. Nicely done,
5/5