Ahh ... I love poems that hold different meanings, and this one does it perfectly! In fact I can take it 3 ways, but here's two: |
That's different than what I expected. Such an interesting piece. I like how it goes 'I can't' but 'I have' which makes it cool. Flow was off every now and then but the idea stood out. Not much to suggest other than watch for flow probs but great idea. |