False Pretence {Triolet}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   May 16, 2007


Touch his heart it is false pretense,
And the farther in love I fall.
This feeling is so immense --
Touch his heart it is false pretense.
From all my impurities, rinse,
Get the dirty sin off it all;
Touch his heart it is false pretense,
And the farther in love I fall.
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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.
Make each line 8 syllables in length

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  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    I didn't know this type of poetry yet, interesting to read, I like your choice of words but the flow was a little off, I don't really know why, but when I was reading it out loud it sounded different then when I was reading it without sound. I hope you understand what I mean..but I still think I deserves 5/5!
    kisses stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    I really don't know know to say about this I wish you had more for me to read to make a clear judgement Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Not too long but i can see its totally express all the most important words here. very meaningful! i think u have a great imagery, ur such too young to have this amazing work so must keep it up! 5/5

    god bless u! and well done

  • 17 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    Again, im captivated by the structure you use on your poems. there is 1 word in here, that throws me for a loop. NASTY. there could be a better word in here, that describes the same thing. but your word choice is yours. (: i love how you take time to construct these. nice write.

    Tom

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