Again, im captivated by the structure you use on your poems. there is 1 word in here, that throws me for a loop. NASTY. there could be a better word in here, that describes the same thing. but your word choice is yours. (: i love how you take time to construct these. nice write.

Tom

Not too long but i can see its totally express all the most important words here. very meaningful! i think u have a great imagery, ur such too young to have this amazing work so must keep it up! 5/5

god bless u! and well done

I really don't know know to say about this I wish you had more for me to read to make a clear judgement Plot121

Hey,
I didn't know this type of poetry yet, interesting to read, I like your choice of words but the flow was a little off, I don't really know why, but when I was reading it out loud it sounded different then when I was reading it without sound. I hope you understand what I mean..but I still think I deserves 5/5!
kisses stephanie