Lottery Sales Represenitive

by Lesbian Natalie   May 16, 2007


Lottery Sales Representative
By: Natalie Heym

Lottery Sales Representative
You deserve a raise
I wish I could be reading this poem to you on a dias
I wanna give you my praise
I want to learn to keep the lottery up in your ways

You Are Extremely smart
You seem to take your work to Heart
With you, our lottery will never fall apart
We are glad that you keep up our lottery at our mart

We Appreciate You making our lottery standout great
You always take pride in your job and seem elate
I just thought I would let you know all this before I eventually vacate

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cathy

    Honestly the poem is good, my advice is don't try to force the rhyming, just write, the flow will follow on its own. Just work on that and youll be fine.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    I thought this was a lovely written poem:

    Constructive critsicm: keep you rhyme scheme the same throughout the poem, some of it was a little off

    Otherwise I loved it

    MD

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    It was kinda all over the place(hea u said honest, lol), well the flow could have been a little bit better, and some of the ryhming was a bit forced, otherwise it was good, 4/5

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