It was kinda all over the place(hea u said honest, lol), well the flow could have been a little bit better, and some of the ryhming was a bit forced, otherwise it was good, 4/5

I thought this was a lovely written poem:

Constructive critsicm: keep you rhyme scheme the same throughout the poem, some of it was a little off

Otherwise I loved it

MD

Honestly the poem is good, my advice is don't try to force the rhyming, just write, the flow will follow on its own. Just work on that and youll be fine.