by Robert May 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The grass needs cut and the swing is too long, |
by Ingrid
What a sweet poem! You write it down in such a way I can almost see it. |
Nice- I liked the greif and the confusion, just the little confusion of new age technology to some one from long ago. |
by BREEawNUHH
I really liked this poem. I think it was very well written. The imagery was good, and that helps make a poem great. |
by Ashley Ann
Very cute poem. i love the imagery. That is what I look for in poem, is how well the imagery is set.. and of course grammar. (I am a grammar freak when it comes to "other" peoples writing. lol ) In one sentece you put "to" when it should be "too". watch words like that. 5/5 |
by Lozbi
Very touching,, loving ur work |