by Robert May 16, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
I wake and everything is a blur to me, |
by Jaymes Haze
Just an average day set in the ways of poetry. |
This made me laugh [I'm not sure if that was your intention]. Despite the title, the actual subject matter of this poem can seen to have a deeper meaning than just searching for glasses; it's like one big metaphor. Or maybe I just over-analyse. |
Again the poem is well written I can relate to much of the cute theme. I am tempted to look for an even deeper meaning though |
by Brittany C
Haha i can relate a little to this one...there were a few errors...the flow was rocky but that can be fixed. 5/5 |
by Michelle18
This is pretty good...but the flow was off in places and some lines were a bit long...overall it was okay...i still liked it...4/5 |