Oveall this poem depicts a good scenario of the stories of life. You can make it better and you ahve the caliber

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Fsams

Strange title, giving the impression thati t was going ot be a funny poem lol. But you really pulled of the strange title with this piece xxx alex xxx

Haha, I liked this, I thought it was adorably sweet.

Flow is okay throughout, and the imagery you created was beautifully done.

I found this to be original and unique in concept, and on the whole an interesting read.

Very unique,and different than what ive ever read, but really good

This is pretty good...but the flow was off in places and some lines were a bit long...overall it was okay...i still liked it...4/5

Haha i can relate a little to this one...there were a few errors...the flow was rocky but that can be fixed. 5/5

Again the poem is well written I can relate to much of the cute theme. I am tempted to look for an even deeper meaning though

This made me laugh [I'm not sure if that was your intention]. Despite the title, the actual subject matter of this poem can seen to have a deeper meaning than just searching for glasses; it's like one big metaphor. Or maybe I just over-analyse.

Good job, anyhow. :)

Just an average day set in the ways of poetry.
Thought it was cute. Not that many families like that anymore.