I mean its like you take my breath away
You make me feel so many ways mostly in ways I cant say
I mean everyday you stay on my m ine
N this is no lie
It's like eveytime I see you
I fall in love with you for the very first time
Everytime I toch you I feel as if I need you
And everytime I hear you I get this lust for you
N when I dont talk to you or see you I feel stange
I get this pain in my hart that forver remain
I know you not belive me But I dont care
As long as I know the way I feel for you has been shared
And I know yout hink you see right thru me
But the images in your head is not me
the way you are neglecting me should not be
I mean dont you see that I want us to be
the feelins I have for you is more than skin deep
So just keep what I said In your head
So you will never forget what I said
Thank you for taking the time reading my poem. I realy wanna know what you think. So leave me a comment a somtin. I dont care if its 12 letters Just leave a lil somting. N if u want ya name so i can read yours. Tanks
0K. T0 ME Y0UR P0EM WAS AVERAGE. iT DiDN`T JUMP 0UT T0 ME & MAKE ME WANNA SAY, "W0W". MAYBE Y0U CAN USE M0RE RAW EM0Ti0NS, iT JUS` FELT UNREAL T0 ME. BUT G0OD J0B 0N WHAT U HAVE. MAYBE U C0ULD EXTEND iT M0RE.
CAN U PLEASE CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS WHEN U GET THE CHANCE. THANX.