HEY H0W ARE Y0U?

0K. T0 ME Y0UR P0EM WAS AVERAGE. iT DiDN`T JUMP 0UT T0 ME & MAKE ME WANNA SAY, "W0W". MAYBE Y0U CAN USE M0RE RAW EM0Ti0NS, iT JUS` FELT UNREAL T0 ME. BUT G0OD J0B 0N WHAT U HAVE. MAYBE U C0ULD EXTEND iT M0RE.

CAN U PLEASE CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS WHEN U GET THE CHANCE. THANX.

--DARLENA.