Porcelain Princess [Triple Triolet]

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   May 17, 2007


Laughter lines - traced beside her sky blue eyes,
Tell me the stories that her mouth can not -
Stars shine bright, falling from the charcoal sky.
Laughter lines - traced beside her sky blue eyes,
Hidden beneath her foundation disguise,
Wrecked from crocodile tears that continue to rot -
Laughter lines - traced beside her sky blue eyes,
Tell me the stories that her mouth can not -

Silver smoke laces through her lungs to -
Paint such a foolish picture of a heart,
And she falls to pieces because of you -
Silver smoke laces through her lungs to -
Swirl colors through stories in her eyes of blue,
And she latches onto her hair, falling apart -
Silver smoke laces through her lungs to -
Paint such a foolish picture of a heart.

And her bruised heart screams out in agony -
Begging in sorrow for its torture to be heard,
Reaching out to an ashamed husband to be;
And her bruised heart screams out in agony,
A wretched song drenched in pain is sung to me,
But a porcelain princess falls without a word;
And her bruised heart screams out in agony -
Begging in sorrow for its torture to be heard.

-Jenna Elphick
May 16, 2007

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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Excellent poem jenna, even love the title, perfect triolet, flows perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Yay First comment! I know, I have neglected commenting your work in awhile.. So sorry. This style, I've never read nor tried, but I throughly enjoyed it! It was well written and very sad. My favorite line was

    And she falls to pieces because of you -

    It just had imagery and a beautiful line.

    Great job as always!

    <3 5.5