by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG May 17, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Laughter lines - traced beside her sky blue eyes, |
by Bryan
Excellent poem jenna, even love the title, perfect triolet, flows perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |
by aDORKable x3
Yay First comment! I know, I have neglected commenting your work in awhile.. So sorry. This style, I've never read nor tried, but I throughly enjoyed it! It was well written and very sad. My favorite line was |