Comments : Porcelain Princess [Triple Triolet]

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Yay First comment! I know, I have neglected commenting your work in awhile.. So sorry. This style, I've never read nor tried, but I throughly enjoyed it! It was well written and very sad. My favorite line was

    And she falls to pieces because of you -

    It just had imagery and a beautiful line.

    Great job as always!

    <3 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Excellent poem jenna, even love the title, perfect triolet, flows perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!