Excellent work. Keep writing and sharing.

This was so beautifuly written...I was pulled in with the opening stanza and from there on it just got better and better.
Flow was flawless throughout, imagery beautifully used and the ending intense and a perfect way to wrap up.

Beautiful, and inspiring, you have done a wonderful job here. The flow sucked me in, and emtions blew me away. the word choice was amazing, on this well penned, well wriiten work. Sheer beauty deserves nothing less than 5/5 yet so much more.

"I thought the world was empty.
That no angels lived in this place.
Suddenly they showed me,
When I looked up at your face."
Beutiful lines...cute n true too...well penned..i liked the way u've repeted the opening n closing stanza..n the love portrayed as a war is a very creative idea..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx