by LithiumSacrifice May 17, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
Keeping the pieces together |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time. |
Aww...this 1 is perfect!!beautifully penned...with good word choice n perfect flow n the emotions portrayed great! |
by Vanessa
Now the emtion was stronger here than in some of your others, again the flow was flawless, and the word choice brillant. I can't find a single thing wrong with this poem. You did an exceeelnt job 5/5 |
Wow. Awesome. |