Wow. Awesome.

Now the emtion was stronger here than in some of your others, again the flow was flawless, and the word choice brillant. I can't find a single thing wrong with this poem. You did an exceeelnt job 5/5

Aww...this 1 is perfect!!beautifully penned...with good word choice n perfect flow n the emotions portrayed great!
Kp up the good job!
xxPoojaxx

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace