You I will yearn

by Kaila   May 17, 2007


Unloved I am tonight,
Solo I am tomorrow,
Solitary I'll be forever,
I'm living here in sorrow.

Forlorn without you here,
desolate I crave your presence,
lonely I stand here waiting,
I yearn to smell your fragrance.

Longing for you'r hand,
Lusting for you'r kiss,
Aching from this pain,
and all I want is this.

Needing to hold you tight,
Craving to grasp your back,
Scared it's finally over,
and beauty is what I lack.

Vile images stare back at me,
Horrid pictures in the mirror,
Grotesque is what you see,
My tears are getting clearer.

Awaiting the moments,
Hoping for you to return,
Anticipating the days,
until then, I will yearn.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    PERFECT. Your best yet.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was very well written, the vocabulary was good, it flowed well.
    keep writing
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I frikken LOVE this...
    The opening stanza really pulled me in, by the end of it I was hooked and from there on it just kept getting better and better.
    The flow was flawless throughout, imagery created vivid pictures, and the word choice was amazing.
    Beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Aww. the wording to this was fabulous. i love your poems. they are worth it to read. you had errors in it, but despite those, this was a total 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    The first 3lines r v beautifully worded n the flow is koOL. Its a great work. tc 5.5

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