This was interesting the first few stanzas had me intrigued and the flow was great well done on this nicely written poem with good vocab~mel

This is Good!. The flow and rhyme were great. Great Vocab.. also. just a great one all around.. i give this a 5/5

Second to the last paragraph was abit off flow and mind sequence as a whole the poem was good in flow and meaning, I saw no real grammar errors to point out but that papagraph was kinda odd to say the least. Nice try though I gave it a four.

I loved the begining.
Althought the rest of your poem just seemed
Show offy to me.
As though your words do not belong there.
Forlorn without you here,
desolate I crave your presence,
I don't know if desolate even belongs there.
I don't know.
I just found it weird.
I give you a 4/5

Wow...this was really a powerful and emotional write...
i loved the way you put adjectivs in the beginning of the lines...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

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This is an awesome poem. Very sweet. Alot of big words. Nice vocabulary. 5/5
-vino

Longing for you'r hand,
Lusting for you'r kiss,
Aching from this pain,
and all I want is this.
you'r should be your, the way you have it written it reads longing for you are hand
lusting for you are kiss. Other that that tthis poem was wonderful. great write, nice vocabm excellent word choice, and great flow. 5/5

Easy 5/5!!=)
Amazing work..the rhyme scheme was good too...n i loved the use of metaphors n in short...great choice of words...the first stanza was awesome...lovely work..sweet!..n good vocab too!
Kp up the good work!
xxPoojaxx

It really is so much easier to be happy when you have somebody to love and love you back, life just seems a whole lot easier. Excellent job as always 5/5

Awesome poem. It almost says exactly how I feel sometimes when I'm not with my boyfriend and it sucks to get paranoid about the relationship. Anyways keep up the great work:)

Nice. No comments as far as improvements. Very nicely written. Passionate, sincere...the making of good poetry. Although I suppose "good" poetry doesn't exist, as each person has their own taste. Well, I suppose my taste of this poem would be good, as I liked it.

I love your poem!!! Great job! :D

For me,,, i like this one it was well written. hmm i dont really know how to give some comments coz i think its was perfectly done 5/5

OK, this is more strong in vocab, so i know you can be strong in your words. I guess you have to feel like you want to write to be able to write a good poem. This is exellent. You deserve the 5 on the vote for this
xxx alex xxx

The first 3lines r v beautifully worded n the flow is koOL. Its a great work. tc 5.5

Aww. the wording to this was fabulous. i love your poems. they are worth it to read. you had errors in it, but despite those, this was a total 5/5.

I frikken LOVE this...
The opening stanza really pulled me in, by the end of it I was hooked and from there on it just kept getting better and better.
The flow was flawless throughout, imagery created vivid pictures, and the word choice was amazing.
Beautiful!

This was very well written, the vocabulary was good, it flowed well.
keep writing
xxxx

PERFECT. Your best yet.