You Tore Me Apart

by LovingAnnabelle   May 17, 2007


In the night I wonder,
in the day I cry,
when I see you everything passes by,
the tear that was once for you,
the thoughts that were one there, are all just pain now,
from the darkness of my life came a light but that light
has now become just a torn apart heart.
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  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Another good poem. Next time write alot more. Don't just write poems for the heck of it. Take some time to write MORE. Get a dictionary, thesauraus. Put your head in that book and explore new poetic words to advance your poetry into the nextt level.